Last day of writing lab
Today is your last day of the quarter in writing lab. Please remember all you learned in My Access to use the corrective actions we discovered to up your holistic score. You will continue to use these tips in your Language Arts classes. The corrections like repeating the prompt at the beginning, middle and end,transitions, spell check of course, and my editor.
1. Name which trick or correction you learned to help your holistic score the most. What did you like best about Writing Lab?
Wednesday, March 18, 2009
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..um i dont know..
What????
I put more transitions and bigger words and that made my score go up.
I liked the trick when I had to put a lot of action words like doing te moonwalk down the the hallway and stuff like that
The trick I learned is to use the pink sheet to use the bigger words and it really boosts my holistic score.
I GOT A PUPZPY AND HER NAME IS COCO
To use big words that I don't understand but it makes me sound smart...
well idk i really did learn everything but i cant remember
I think that adding a variety of sentences helped my score the most.
One trick i learned in writing lab is that i learned how to use the My editor to correct some stuff!!!!!!
To use 50$ words
The thing that helped me was by correcting my grammar. The thing I liked best was that we got to use computers instead of using paper. Also that you could play games on study island
The best trick to use in writing lab is Transition words. I liked that we got to listen to the radio.
I don't know, but if there is anything I like about writng lab it would be going on study island.
my trick is To use lots of Transition words......
Also try to use big words that are better then the smaller ones....
Also not to use And alot...
And to stay on the topic and not talk about something really differnt...
And how to Spell things....
The trick I learned to help my holistic are using transition words and $50 dollar words. The most I liked about this class was that we got to sit on the couch and how we were on computers all day because I love working on computers!!
-->I'm going to miss you Ms.Kusnik<--
I used the vocab thingg and other stiff.
the trick that ¥ used was ask you.the time that I like the best is when I was presenting my essay.
To use 50$ words.
UMMM yEA iDk WhiCh ONE BUt yEA i LiKEd tHAT yOU gET tO ASSOCiATE BUt STiLL dO yOUR WORk At tHE SAME TiME*tHiS ClASS WAS StRAiGHt i GUESS BUt iT WASN't tHE BEST!
Oh! the thin i learned was to put bigger words. there 100$ words.
I don't know what trick I learned. What I liked most about writing lab was I don't know.
I put more transitions and bigger words to push my grade up
i dont know.
I like the days that we got to play anything we wanted.
wha????? (<`~`) KIRRBY!!!!
i dont get it????????????????
A sentence has a subjet and a predacite.
TO USE THOSE BIG MONEY WORDS
Add more detail such as making:
I own a brown table.to I own a dark brown table that is made of pinewood.
4es I use the tips in Class or other Class to help the day tohelp help me in school me.
I learned to use more transition words in my essays to raise my score. I liked that during ISAT we got a free day.
That I havce a good topic sentence and a good main idea
I liked the trick where I learned how to use lots of transitions and different verbs. The best thing I liked about writing lab is that we had cool writing topics to write about.
I used better organization skills, I made sure i had correct spelling and words that made the work worthy of reading and on grade level.
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Um... spelling is what made get higher
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um....I used more transition words.My favorite part about writing lab is when we had free time on the computers.
I would like to use the spell check because I wouldnt want my essay for some thing important to be miss spelled and make it look like a 1st grader was writing it.
I learned to use better organization, powerful spelling words.
The one thing i like about writing lab is the relaxing isat day where we could just sit back and play on the computer.
I think that what helped me in myacsses was number 4;use 50$ words.the thing that i liked about writing lab is i have the coolest teacher in the world of writing lab.
Oh, my favorite part of writing lab was when we werwe allowed to do different things instead of my access and study island.
The thing i use is larger words, and how to spell better. All the things you have taught me, will help!!! I'm going to miss you!
UMMM... O_o I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THIS BLOG MEANS.
I put bigger words that made my score go up. I like it in here because we get to go on the computer.=)
What i like best in writinglab is going to studyisland and myaccess.
I WOULD USE MORE TRASISTION WORDS. I WOULD ALSO USE A WHOLE BUNCH OF VOCABULARY. MRS. KUSNIK IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i use bigger words sometimes and i got to flip computers
Um Mrs.Kusnik
I would say i would have more capitalization.My favorite thing about writing lab is that we get our own computers.
My favorite thing about writing lab is study islanda.
I learned how to improve on writing paragraphs and complete sentences
Thank You Mrs.Kusnik (:^D
The reson why I like writing lab is because of Mrs.Kusnik ,study island,and my access.
I learned how to use punctuation much better and other stuff to my favorite thing of writting lad is that we use computers and I am going to mis miss kusnik.
what helped me is my grammer
the thing that helped me was my spelling
UMM WEll i LiKE VERy THiNG hAhA lOl
HEy yESENiA!hAhA lOl ilY GURl
It helped me with my spelling....... my favorite part about writing lab is getting to do something other than study island and my acess!!!!!! -n- bein with the cuddie angela!!!! ;)
The things that helped me the best is the transition words. They were awesome and they were great usage.
I.M.W.L BECAUSE ITS SO AWESOME!!=(
My trick is to use positive words and more rich words.
The reason that helped me the most was using transition words.Tge thing I liked most about writing lab was getting to use the computers.
I learned in writing lab is big words, complete sentences, and how to spell big words.
I learned how to use the spell check to spell my words correctly. My favorite thing about Writting Lab was being able to learn all about the new types of writting. Such as a persuasive story,or paragraphs.
HEY ANGELA!!!!
ILY TOO!!! HA HA LOL
I used transitions words to make my score higher and what I liked most of all was being in study island.
I learned how to do better sentences.I also liked the trick that you would go to my access and when I used the vacab sheet so my story could be filled with fantastic words.
what in the world
One thing that I learned in writing lab is to repeat the prompt in your essay to increase your score.
... i dONt kNOW WhAt yOUR ASkiNg?
♥ALi MARtiNEZ (tAkEN]♥
I used bigger vobcabulary.-and i like the computers and the teacher because she seems nice.*]
I learned how to used $50 words.
SORRy ABOUt tHE WHOlE COMMENt tHiNG WE did<-- Oh &* WELL UMMM i dONt kNOW REALLy WhAT tO SAy ABOUt tHE tOPiCk tHO.=P
(*ME&*ALi hAd fUN At tHE RiNk ON tUESdAy.lOl.HiTTiNG HER WiTH HER OWN ShOE &* dANCiNG kRAZy STiLL HEHEHE] =]
((GOiNG tO MiSS tHiS ClASS A lil Ni GUESS]] =)
UMMM..ORGANiZTiON SKiLLS
I think it is repeating the prompt in your essay also using transitions.
iM gOiNg tO MiSS tHiS ClASS,.,. bECAUSE it WAS VERy NiCE ANd pEACfUll*
(hA At dAh SkAtiNg RiNk POOhPOOh ANd ANtHONy tHREW ME!! lOl...ANd MEh ANdd NiCOlE WAS dANCiNg KkRAZyy!.? ANdd i fEll AlOt bECAUSE Of KkUWAN!!! lOl.. BUt it hURt.. i HAVE A BRUiSE bECAUSE Of HiM♥
i lEARNEd A lOt iN ThiS ClASS, bUt i CANt REllY REMEMbER ThE EXACt ThiNqS. bUt iMA MiSS tHiS ClASS, iTS REllY COOl iN hERE & YEAhh tHAS WASSAAAA.=P
I learned that 50 dallar words will help your holistic score. Plus spell check also helps YOUR SCORE.
Wel i didnt learn anything from the writting lab class and there is nothing that i really like about the writting lab class
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