Thursday, October 7, 2010

Fire Prevention Month

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

70 comments:

drionnaa8a said...

it is loud and will warn you if theres a fire.

ArmoniH8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
incase of a fire, then it'll warn you.

Alexis W 8A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because if you don't have one and there is a fire you might die.

kalid8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
incase of a fire, because it'll warn you.

david8 said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...You can cath on fire and die

jorge ortiz 8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
Your safety is most the most important.
Carbon monoxide can kill you if you breath it.

JoseA8A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If you dont you will never find out that your house could be on fire unti l you smell it and by the time you smell it your house is going to be half way gone

IzarO8A said...

My home needs a smoke detector because if there is a fire in the house while we are all sleeping, we wouldn't know and die because we can't tell anything without one..:)

JawaunG.8A said...

Your homes need smoke detectors because when you sleep a fire can just break out and your will need something that is loud to wake you up so you dont burn.

Jazmin T 8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... It will prevent you from burning or becoming trapped by the the fire before it spreads everywhere. It could save your life and maybe even your house.

Katelyn F8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because without a smoke detector you could get seriously injured or possibly killed. Smoke detectors are designed to keep you safe. If there is a fire in your house you will have no way of knowing if you didn't have a smoke detector.

JuanTarin8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...




We need a smoke detector because what if one day your house could be on fire, but you don't smell it yet you hear the sound of a smoke detector. Thats when it comes in handy it could save your life one day if you have one.

Estefania Z 8A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
it is for your safety. If there is a lot of smoke in your house, you may not even notice. The smoke detector will go off and you'll see. Also, it can help save your life in case of a fire. It will warn you that there is smoke in your house. You may be in danger.

Ariel A 8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because it can tell you that you're in danger with a fire. You can be sure that you'll get out on time because of the loud noise.

Eric L 8A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...When there is fire you will know and so you can be safe and warn you to

javon smith fnhs said...

it is loud and it will warn you bout an fire an fire alame that lound and warn you or and smoke datecter.it for safty reson and your heath.

leonelp8a said...

Your house needs a smoke detector for many reasons. What if theres a fire. You need to know so you can get out the house. The smoke detector will warn you. And if theres a fire i think most likely you can die.

Kassandraq 8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because you need to make sure your home is safe for you and your family. You want to make sure you have a smoke detector so that incase of a fire you will get out just in time, and be safe and no one getting hurt.

PeterGarcia 8a said...

Your home need a fire detector for you don't die or to warn you if their is a fire in your house.

dajon 8a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

I think that some people homes need a smoke detector. If you have a smoke detector you can keep every one in your home safe.Everyone should have a smoke detector in every room, even in their bathroom. Plus if you have a smoke detector at the sound of the beep you can out of your house faster.

kendalltucker7a;)$$ said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If there is a fire you need to get out or you will get badly hurt

DariusC7A said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.

Homes need to have smoke detecters because if your sleep and something is smoking then you could hear the loud smoke detected beaping loudly.

MichaelE7 said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... Gust in case of your house caches on fure so when it smell's smoke.

Isiah T 7A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
Your safety is most the most important.
Carbon monoxide can kill you if you breath it.

Kayla D. 7A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because...

Your home needs a smoke detector because if I am sleeping and there is a fire and my parents can't get to me. I could die of being burned in a fire so thats why you need a fire alarm.

Alexandra Collins 7A....)* said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because if a fire stares in your house and you could be sleeping it will go off. Usually it will go off if it sences smoke and once it sences smoke it goes off.

Clark7A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
In your house everyone might not be a light sleeper. If your are sleep at night and there is a fire people need to be able to here the smoke detecter. Also someone might be in on room but there is a fire in another they need to be alerted.

pavel cardenas 7a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because last time I was at my house there was a kitchen fire and no one noticed it but my dog cause he was barking and we looked and there was a fire.

Gabriel V 7A said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... if you are sleeping at night and a fire gets started then the smoke detector will tell yoiu that there is a fire in your house and that you need to get out of there and go to a safe place like accross the street or to a nieghbors house and call the fire department. also a smoke detector can tell you if food is burning.

Morgan J 7A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because when there is a fire you will know and you can get out of the house quick,fast and in a hurry so nobody won't get burned and or killed.

austinB 7A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because it will tell you when there is a fire and if you are sleeping it will wake you up wwith its loud alarm its nice to not die

Ericka7A;)$$$$$$$ said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
If you don't have one then your house could be on fire and explode and you would not even notice.

!Caprisha!:) 7-A said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
If there's a fire you'll know and can get out of your house alot faster.

marcus7a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If you house is on fire and you are asleep you could die.

AsHlEiGh c. 7A ;D said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because incase u have a fire it will warn you.

nicole said...

You need smoke detectors are important for your house and school because in case of a fire they warn you.

ken flammes said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... if a fire starts in the walls then the whole house would explod.

David 7A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... if you don't have one you won't know if there is fire.a fire detector is programed to detet fires if you don't have one you could die.

brandon7a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because if one of your candals sets a rag on fire you'll know. You also need one incase of carrbon monoxide poisioning.

daniyaw said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... my house needs a smoke detector because if we have a fire and your in your room with your door shut you wont know if there's a fire cause you wont hear the alarm.

Karina Lopez :) said...

You will need a smoke detector because if there is a fire in your house in the night you wouldn't notice and you might get burned alive.

luisq7a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because... in case your house gets into a fire.Sometimes the ditectors are loud and the fire departements can hear when their is a fier at your house or at someones house.If people dont have a smoke detector the fire departement is not going to know if theirs a fire at your house or at others.and last reason that you should have a fire detector because it tells you if there is a fire at your house.

quintonw7 said...

People should have smoke detectors. They need it because it's an alarm to warn you about smoke. If you have a fire in the middle of the night it would be loud enough to wake you. It could be very helpful.

kierra tyler 7a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

Ur house need a smoke detecteor because if the the oven on to long . When the candel falls on the floor. Another reason is because if u beath in the nastey eqqey smell.U can die get burned and more worst things.

anthony7a$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. if thir is a fier get down ahd roll

Jaimer7a$$$$$$$$ said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.
Your home needs a smoke detector because you could be sleeping you might have a fire because you left a candle on. or you just got people that you dont like and they try to burn your house on

Shakara.S said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...if a fire start when you are sleep you won't know and you will die.If your cooking and
you go out of the kitchen and it starts a fire you would know and save your house for catching on fire.

Kendall C. 6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... Just in case of a fire we need need one to alert us to get out safely. Also to alert our nighbors.

myam6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
My home needs a smoke detector because we have a five year old in our house and he could easily set something on fire, it could be intentional or accicidental.

Kemonte G6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
In case of something that might be ignited.

JonathanH 6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because there could be a fire at anay time it can be at nigth or at day.

arnulfop6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If we did not have a smoke diecter and there is a fire in your house the fire will sound the smoke detcter

arnulfop6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If we did not have a smoke diecter and there is a fire in your house the fire will sound the smoke detcter

zachc3 said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...I have a smoke detector ,but it goes off real easyly when it is warm when my mom cooks.

Maria G 6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

If your house was on fire and you didnt know, and you didnt have a smoke detector then your house would spread more fire. You could also possilbly die if you didnt put out the fire.

shamique c 6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...
My home needs a smoke detector because if there was a fire we would not know and our house will burn

Ayanna M.Scott6A said...

"Fire Prevention Month"
Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

If you have a fire you will know you are having a fire in your house!!

andrew diaz 6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...WELL my house already does have 1 but all other house nedd 1 just incase theres a fire.:) (^^^)

Richard Ramirez said...

My home does not need one because im safe.

StephanieC. ^FT^ 6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If you don't have a smoke detector, you never know if something starts to burn and then suddenly it becomes rapid fire. For an example, say that you don't have a smoke detector and accidently leave a... a lamp on and it is right near a curtain. Then you go to your room to get a bookor whatever. Then when you come back say after two minutes and its on fire like crazy. You would have neaded a smoke detector so you knew something was on fire or was about to be on fire so you could have called the fire dept.

HURR :P

Jacqueline Kollman 6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... My house needs fire detectors because if your sleeping and something mite happen and you wont now. When you hear the alarm it would wake you up and you will hurry up and leave the house.

teresa 6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

if theres a fire then you will need to get out of the house so you will noy get on fire.

KemonteG6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because something might occur and you wouldn't even notice the situation that is going on and it could be really harmful and you might have a very slight chance of getting into a bad incident.

Re'gene c.6a said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because...
If fire starts and everyone is asleep then the smoke detector would go off and everyone will wake up. and hopefully everyone would have gotten out safe.

Ayanna M.Scott6A said...

Fire Prevention Month

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

Incase of an fire you would know so you are not in your house while it is burning! So you can be aware oof what is happening.

Nico Perez6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ... If there is a fire in your home you and all of your stuff culd be burned.Another reason why is because you could endanger other people too if you don't get a smoke detector. My last reason why is because if you don't get a smoke detector the fire could get on flammable things and get bigger.

ali jones said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.
so people wont get hurt and so stuff wont get hurt like dogs close

Nathan6A said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors

your homes need a smoke alarm is becuase that if you are sleeping and you have a pet or a mice problem and you had a power out and you was sleeping and you had to use a candle for light and it is on a table and you cat is chasing the mouse then the cat runs in to the tabble and abble is made out of wood and it can set fire and cause the house to be on fire and your smoke deticter goes off and you wake up immedietly and you check you call 911 and go through the fire exit that you and your family set up to be and you will be safe.

Tashanni6A said...

Your home needs a smoke detector because ...

If you don't have a soke detector you never know if something start's to burn in your house and you don't know about it then y want have a place to live and that is why your house need's a smoke detector.

Angelica J said...

October is Fire Prevention Month. Today I want you to convince me that my home needs a smoke detector. Use convincing words why homes need to have smoke detectors for their safety. Write a short paragraph for your persuasive reasons why homes need smoke detectors.

Your home needs a smoke detector because
My house needs a smoke ditector because if there was ever a fire and i was sleeping we could die in a fire. I remember a time I was at Wisconsin Dells and the smoke ditectore went off but it was because my great unkle birnt some pancakes.

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