When writing descriptive sentences we need to use adjectives and be descriptive. I will write a "telling sentence" you will need to change it to a showing sentence.
Telling sentence: Every morning before school I do the same thing.
example of a showing sentence: Each morning I wake up to the sound of my alarm clock as I crawl out of my bed and slowly walk to school using my same identical schedule everyday.
1. I went over to talk to the boy.
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I hesitantly went over to the shy boy with a brave face.
I stood up shakily to the boy of my dreams, walked directly up to him, said hi and did a little wave. I could't believe he said hi back.
I slowly walk up to the boy as he stares at me with a puzzled look in his eyes, when i got there we had a very dry conversation.
I don't know what to show. It was so boring if we do tell-show.
i went over to talk to the boy because him had my pink pencil that had fell on the floor.
I went very slowly down the strange hallway to talk to the oddly tall, brown eyed boy.
I walked over to the books so that I could speak kind words to the cute, caring, loving boy of my dreams.
I slowy went over to to tell the boy his shows was tied.
It was about five o'clock when I went over to talk to the boy, as he was having conversation with my bestfriend.
It was a cold and cloudy day, I could smell the rain on the side walk as I slowly went to talk to the boy.
I walked over to the shy boy giving my best not to screw it up.
I walked over to the disgusting and engrossing boy at the end of the fairly huge hall one cautious and terrified step at a time.
I slowly walked over to the boy to talk with him.
I finally went over to the boy that had to give me his money, because I told him to. I iwas so happy that I found that boy. And that was the greatest day of my life.
Every morning I wake up somme tine 6:00AM or 5:00AM to wake up sometime text to my friend is he or she go bus i will go outside.
I slowly went over to talk to the cute looking boy as he smiled and start walking toward to.
i confedintly walked up to the shy misterious girl.
I slowly came over to talk to the boy with the bright yellow shirt.
I never walk slowly to the boy but my mom make me shy if she siad look that boy like u.
I slowly walked to the boy to tell him I liked him no homo.
i slowly made my way over to the fine young lady, who was shyly waiting for, and said hi to her.
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I slowly went up to the boy and punched him
i slowy went up to the kid and kicked him.
i went over to the boy slowly as i wanted to ask him for a pencil but i was really shy and didnt know if i should.
As I walked to his house I thought of Everything I could say to this boy of my dreams.
slowly i went over to talk the shy boy in our classroom.
I woke up and went.
I wake up evry moring then i get up put my jeans on then my shoes then brush my teeth.
I walked over to the boy to ask him if he had a pencil that I could borrow.
I stood up, shaking so much that my teeth were rattling as I walked over to talk to the boy who looked so confident.
I went over to talk to the girl but I walked very slowly to think of what I was going to say to her.
I walked very casually over to the tall boy weaing his gym uniform.
When i heard a noise downstairs,i got up and i walked really slow.And when i finally got downstaris,i seen a little girl.I walked passed her and felt her skin.And i just realized it was a ghost.
I quietly waled over to the crying girl. she was staring at an ice cream cone she had dropped on the ground.
i went over to the girl with the tall legs and perl blue girl with pink dress on to help her with her homework.
I walked to my 1st period class. Walking past everyone, getting shoved, pushed in the shoulder while juggling my books.
It was the middle of the school day ,and I saw a small short kid by my dull tan locker so I went over by him to ask him what he whats.
I saw a small boy that looked lost and looked as if he was crying so I rushed over to talk to him.
when i wake up to my alarm at 6:30 then I jus go and eat something.After I do that I text krystal and ericka saying good moring.After I do that I get dressed and go on myspace nd wait till its 7:19 then i leave for school
Evey morning I do the same thing. I wake up to a alarm clock, as I sowly walk out of bed, mosing to the bathroom to wash up as my mom yells at me like a child in trouble,to get out of the bathroom. I rush to my room to nfind something to wear in my big jungle ofa mess. As i turn on the radio I wait like an animal waiting for its pray to the last minute. The I walk down stairs and leave.
As I was walking up to Ms.Foxworth, I was scared she was going to give me bad news.
It was a cold brezze outside.the only vision possible was at least 4 feet.I saw her there just satnding like a stone.Hello there i said as i went over to talk to her.
I went over to ther house to talk to my friend which is a boy.
One day i went to talk to the little girl across a street.
i went running to the girl to tell her something important.
I went over to talk to the nice boy with the fade.
I went walking twords the boy not knowing what I was going to do
I hesitantly went over to the shy boy with a brave face
I walked fast over to the boy who had stole my pen.
I strolled over to ask the boy, did you watch that show last night it was funny.
I slowly went up to the girl and greeted her to our neighborhood
My overly ecited puppy rushed to the gate, and started squealing when she caught the first glimpse of her owner.
I walked to the strange looking boy at the other end of the hallway.
I went over to talk to the boy.
i walked over to talk to the boy and told him i liked his hair no homo.
i went to tell this gril something i know about something.
I walked quickly to the boy's locker to deliver an important message from his teacher Mr.Gray.
i finally stood up to the boy with a wierd look on my face.
I ran over to talk to the cute gril
I went to my friend house to play video games.I drove my brother dirt bike to my friend house.
I slowy walked over to the boy to get a game
I told the Boy to give me my pencil back.
My dad drove me to school at 7:38 and we listened to KoRn on the way to school
I walked speedly over to say hi to the shy and confuse new boy.
I skipped over to talk to the boy about last night's basket ball game that I watched on comcast hign defintion. and Koby Bryant leaped into the air and slam dunked the ball into the hoop.
every morning i either go on myspace or i use the remaning time to sleep
I take a bubble bath, with my rubber duck, and my floating boat. Then, I go to school.
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