When writing descriptive sentences we need to use adjectives and be very descriptive. I will write a "telling sentence" you will need to change it to a showing sentence.
Telling sentence: Every morning before school I do the same thing.
example of a showing sentence: Each morning I wake up to the sound of my alarm clock as I crawl out of my bed and slowly walk to school using an identical routine everyday.
1. I walked over to talk to the boy. (make this a showing sentence)
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i wake up n eat if i feel like it take a shower brush my teeth get dressed an come to school
I walked over to talk to the boy as the bell rang for class and i knew we were going to be late.
i walked overtothe boy and asked himfor 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 dollars.
I walked over to talk to the girl and she was talking to much so i left.
I walked over quickly to talk to the adorable boy before class started.
I walked over to talk to this girl about hooking up because im in need of a girlfriend.
When I was walking over to talk to the boy my friend stopped me to say hi.
I WALKED QUICKLY OVER TO THE GIRL TO TELL HER A SECRET ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED AT MY FRIEND'S PARTY WITH HER YOUNGER SISTER.
I walked slowly to the the boy who was sitting on a trash can to talk to him.
I walked over and talked to a girl. Her eyes were like to clear jamacian waters. Her skin as smooth as a babies.
i walked over to the boy to talk to him.
I walked over to the boy who made me angry every day i said " you need to stop saying things about me friends his answer " shut up" then out of nowhere i socked him in the face.
As I walked over to the boy sitting at the table across the lunch room from me, he looked up at me curiously as I called his name.
Every day i do see the same thing in the same spot when i walk home form school.
Every morning I wack up from my alarm coolk. I get up and dreasup. Next I do my hair. Brash my teeth. Do my bed. Then I eat breafes.
I walked up to a boy and slapped him amazingly hard because he hit my car and i walked away
Every morning I go to talk to the girls.
One warm quiet morning I walked over to a boy.I heard the sound of birds cheerping and I felt the wind blowing.
I walked home and it was cold.
I walked home and it was chilly.
I wake up every morning to my alarm clock on my phone. Crawl out of my bed like I was sleeping forever and finally woke up
As I walked over to the boy, I remembered I had left my books in my lockerand then bell rang so had to go to class
I walked over to the boy, and gave him a hug.
Each morning I get up go to the bathroom do my thing and go.
I wake up every morning and do the same thing.
I walked over to the boy that I have known all my life and who has always been there for me.
When I wake up I take an nice 30 min shower then brush my teeth and get dreesed for school then i'm on my way to school.
The school bell was going to ring soon, so I didn't have much time. I wasted no time, and walked over to the boy.
Every morning beffore i go to school i put my clothes on i eat breakfest and i brush my teeth and go to school
i wake up late take my time getting ready and then come to school at like 915
I wake I get drss and eat brekfest do my hair brush my teeth and come to school
I walked over to the boy and asked for his house, his money and his car
i walked up to the boy and asked him for 10 dollars.
I walked over to talk to a boy as the bell rang because I wanted him to be late.
i will wack up and give it a hag because it a hag to a gril
I walked over to talk to my cousin which is a boy. I asked him if he was going anywhere because I wanted to go to his house so he can helpe me with my homework. He is in high school and he is very smart.
I walked over to my friend house to see if he was walking to school.
I went to go talk to a friend and he wzlked away.
I WAKEUP AN THEN I LOOK AT MY WINDOWN AT THINK ABOUT WATH GOING TO HAPEN TODAY AND THEN TAKE A SHOWER AN BRUSH MY TEETH GET DRESSED AN WE PRETTY AN BEFOR SCHOOL TACK TO MY BOYFRIEND AN COME TO SCHOOL.
i walked over to the girl and asked her was she going to the movies still this weekend with her cousin and my cousin
I walked up to a short, light skinned, clueless girl and i asked her what was the the answer to a easy and non confusing qeustion of what is 5x8 and she said the completly wrong answer of 67.
Laquan went over his cousins house to play.
The girl walked up to the and then said "How are you?
I slowly walked over to the girl standing at the end of this narrow hallway catching only a glimpse of her while i made my way down passing kids brutally throwing paper by passing up lockers and now im here
I walked over to the boy and said
your head just fell off in my food.
when i was druming i was thinking about what the next beat is and what i should play our somthing XD..
I waled over to the girl in the pink-flowered shirt and asked if she wanted to play tetherball
I strutted up to the handsome boy just as the bell rang with a loud ''DING'', summoning us to class.
my`sister hit me on the head this morning
every day i wake up to my moms yell and i do the same thang like get dressedd others an
Lauren went to the store to buy some milk. The milk was four dollars so I went to go some juice instead. Than I walked a long way over to my house.
When I walked down the hall to talk to one of my guy friends and just about when I went to talk to him the bell went off and it was so agervating 'cause it happens to me every time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Before school every day I go bake to sleep on the coach
I wake up go to to brush my teeth get dressed and change then im off to school to talk.
I walked to the office because I was late to school and I got a tardy pass
I wake up get ready for school then I go downstairs and eat then watch a little t.v. for about 10 minutes and then leave to school.
i walked to the girl and said hi
I wake up,eat breakfast,take a shower,get dressed,and go to school.
i walked to the boy and asked him for his house.
I WALKED OVER TO THE BOY AND SAID GIVE ME MONEY.
When i wake up i eat breakfast get in a hot shower brush my teeth comb my hair or brush it if i got my hair cut and put my stuff on and then leave
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