Today's writing exercise is an easy one. You are going to take the shell that I give you and adapt it to fit your poem. Write your poem inside your notebook first and then you will post it on the blog.
First pick an emotion to work with. Don't pick a quarter word like Happy or Sad. Think more towards a $5 word like Elated or Depressed.
Now think of how that emotion would act? The better you can describe the feeling, the better the poem will turn out. Here is your writing shell.
"Title Should be the Emotion You Choose"
I saw ____________ clearly.
He/She was _______________________.
He/She turned _____________________.
I saw his/her ___________________ eyes and __________________ skin.
I heard him/her say __________________________
And I felt _________________________________.
Here is my personification poem I wrote after my mother past away from Leukemia:
"Cancer"
I see Cancer clearly.
It is standing along the sidelines,
watching,
looking for its next victim.
It's face is pale and body weak;
however, its eyes are glowing green with the ability to see through society's social classes.
It smells damp-
Feels cold-
Has the ability to regenerate.
Be cautious of Cancer for it strikes without warning...
One cannot hear it whisper their name-
Shh...
I hear something...
Here is TJ's poem, he was a former student:
"Joy"
I saw Joy clearly.
He was smiley and very polite.
He turned gingerly and walked towards me cleanly and gracefully.
I saw his great ocean-like eyes that seemed to conjoin perfectly with is tan skin.
I heard him say melodious things to me
And I felt calm and warm.
So you can see, the poetry shell has a lot to offer. You can really expand on this poem like I did or just do a fill in like TJ. Either way, you'll come up with a great poem!
This assignment is worth 10 points!
“Depression”
ReplyDeleteI saw depression clearly,
She was standing there waiting to pounce
On my happiness,
She turned and said “no more real smiles here comes
The fake smiles and the all the tears”,
I saw her red and puffy eyes and her scarred skin,
I heard her say “I’m sorry it had to end this way but you
Can thank your past for this”,
And I felt like my smile turned to a frown,
My sunshine just wasn’t shining any more,
That the birds were not singing at loud,
My night sky became darker.
That’s when I realized that depression
Got the best of me.
"Gloomy Death"
ReplyDeleteI saw the gloomy light of Death clearly.
It was deep and dark.
It had turned to show all the pain.
I saw its pitch black and red eyes and its skin covered in shame and disgrace.
I heard it say,
"This is for all the sadness in the world."
And I felt sick to my stomach all hurt in the end.
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ReplyDelete"School"
ReplyDeleteI saw school clearly.
She was lifeless...boring.
She turned kids into homework zombies.
She smelled of cruddy school food and her skin was a brown graffiti stained brick.
She made me feel as if life as I knew it was destroyed.
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ReplyDelete"Optimism"
ReplyDeleteI saw Optimism clearly, standing tall through the clouds
She was looking towards the mountains;
Not concerned with the worldly pessismists...
She turned towards me and smiled awkwardly, but powerully.
I saw her golden eyes shining with a thousand crystals. Her skin was almond colored, glowing brilliantly.
I heard her whistle a sweet harmony that was liquid honey to my newly-opened ears. She was so carefree.
I felt elated, nothing could bring me down...
"death"
ReplyDeleteI saw death clearly. he was right next to me. he turned and I jumped. I saw his red eyes and dark skin. I heard him saying come with me and I felt bad.
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ReplyDeleteThe strain of questions that burn in my brain about wheather love main in its touch .These thoughts are like salman swimming down stream in you deseat .These thougths are as bad if it were a child be took of its mother .Iam left surround in darkness but i refuse to be swallowed by it
ReplyDeletei saw my little brother clearly,
ReplyDeletehim there laying like a peanut,
opening my heart to happiness,
i turned to my mother and said,
"he is beautiful"
i saw my mothers eyes turn to water,
and so did mine,
just looking at him made me wonder,
5 years from now he would be big and cute,
running like a jaguar.
so every night i would thank god for such a beautiful brother he gave me......
thank you god.
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ReplyDelete.........."ROUDY"..................
ReplyDeleteI saw roudiness clearly, she turned all the lames furious. I saw her crazy, insane eyes, and I heard her say "Be what you are, express yourself; have the courage for anything you wanna get down with." And I felt more Roudier then I had ever felt, It made me heated.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I saw death in my dream very clearly.
ReplyDeleteIt was covered with a black sheet.
Then it turn facing me,it showed feared to me.
I saw it's red eyes in complete darkness. I couldn't see the color of it's skin.
Then out of a sudden the darkness becamealittle bit of light,that was when I saw it's hands they didn't have skin.
I heard it say to me that I was going to die when I'm old.
Then I feltprotected when a lot of light cleared the place.
i saw stupidness clearly,she was standing there calling me tempting me to be stupid,she said "you cant resist my temptation it is not in your power and you cant get read of me you will listen i can wait" the lies it fills her with all tghe power she needs to give me that last push off the cliff as i lie as i steal as i fight i build her up in the feuter she will be unstopible it will not be me in command it will be my stupidness and all i can do is watch my life go down the toilet and then stand there waiting for the pain to fill me and drowned me as i stare at that girl her name is stupidness
ReplyDelete"Hate"
ReplyDeleteI saw hate clearly,
She was giving me a painful look,
She turned to hit me, but she stopped right away,I saw her blood shot eyes and her skin crispy brown, I heard her say "Things will never change",
And I felt so confused on what she meant.
i saw death,
ReplyDeleteit was standing there waiting to attack me, want
it turned to me and said
"i know you still don't wabt to go but it was gods choice...
goodbye...sorry".
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ReplyDelete"jealousy"
ReplyDeleteHe turned tourd me very angry.
I saw his eyes a dark red and skin very red.
I heard him say i will get you tommorow and i felt angry.
I saw the cat clearly he was mad he turned red .I saw his ornger eyes and is yellow hear.He waus mad
ReplyDelete"HEART BROKEN"
ReplyDeleteI saw brokenhearted clearly.
She was heart broken.
She turned quickly.
I saw her big sad eyes and light brown skin.
I heard her say "LEAVE ME ALONE" and I felt worried.
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ReplyDelete"Love"
ReplyDeleteI saw Love clearly.
He was cuddly,and sweet .
I saw hearts floating above his head.
I heard him say,"it's Love at first sight."
And I felt like a new bird in the sky!
"Lonleyness"
ReplyDeleteI saw Lonleyness clearly today
When she turned to look my way,
She said "I'm what you feel inside"
I saw her glaring,pitch black eyes
And I felt her smooth, ghost like skin
As she moved on her way in
I felt so lonley at that time
"Spooked"
ReplyDeleteI saw his yellow tounge clearly.
He turned and looked at me.
I saw his red eyEs and his skin was white.
I heard him say, "I know where you live."
I was SPOOKED!
I saw revenge clearly.
ReplyDeleteHe stood there angry,confused,waiting.
He turned and was gone in a second.
I saw the fire in his eyes.
I saw the black clothes on his back.
I heard him say, "Good-bye my old friend."
I felt life escape my grip.
"Excitement"
ReplyDeleteI saw Excitement clearly.
She was jittery and excited.
She turned and smiled at me.
I saw her bright blue eyes and glowing tan skin.
I heard her say everything that gave her Excitement.
I felt overwelmed because alot of things gave her excitement.
"DEATH"
ReplyDeleteI saw her clearly she was leaving.
she turned around and said I will see you later.
I saw her on the news her eyes look different and her skin was burnt.
I heard her in my sleep and I feld scared.
"Depression"
ReplyDeleteI looked at Depresion straight in the eye.
She was scared and looked lonely.
She said to me in a soft teary voice,
"I'm in one of my many moods, but this is this is the worst."
I knew what she ment.
Ihad felt Depression too.
Depressionstill lingered.
Hanging on every word utered.
she was a dark cloud that would never go away on a sunny day.
A cloud tht never let sun in.
Her confusion was a maze I had to get through
She disappered, but I smelled her perfume lingeing in the air.
*Love*
ReplyDeleteI saw love very clearly
He was watching me bird like a bird in the nights sky
I saw him spread his wings like a angel sent from heaven
His eyes glistened like the ocean during the sunset
and his skin seemed so soft and silky
I heard him say that he was waiting for me
And I felt so loved and innocent
I saw love so clearly
*stress*
ReplyDeleteI saw stress clearly,
It was standing there looking pale,
She turned around and i seen her stress,
eyes and face and skin looking so sad and depressed,
I heard her say she was in pain,
and I felt hurt inside because I know how she felt being stressed because i was stressed.
..::pain::..
ReplyDeleteI saw pain in the face.
It couldn't help but look for the next b>person/b> to strike.
I saw it's striking red and it's blazing skin.
I heard it say "pain is experience gained" but to some is just hurt not needed.
And I felt hopeless about to break down and cry.
"Excited"
ReplyDeleteI saw sun and the baseball cleary.
Melvin was excited to play today.
Then Matt had been taking to us about it.
I saw that we was practicing hitting. Then Matt says we are going to lose.
And I felt very confident.
"lOVED"
ReplyDeleteI saw the day clearly.
He was really sweet.
He turned around at looked at me sweetly.
I saw his ocean blue eyes and brown skin.
I heard him say "I LOVE YOU".
And I felt lOVED.
"Friends"
ReplyDeleteFriends are like sisters,
you spend time together,
you share secret's,and never let it go.
Friends are like sister's and they will allways be.
Happiness
ReplyDeleteShe was very excited.
She turned to me and said hi.
She was looking at me with her brown eyes and brown skin.
I heard her say will you go out wih me and I felt like I was in heaven.
"Anger"
ReplyDeleteI saw nothing but a figure,
anger eched on his face not a smile to be seen,
not even a frown.
There was only a growl
he told me to enbrace my anger
it helps you out with many things, so think of all those who called you names names.
I thought of those people who called me names
I then felt anger looking for me i tryed to repel it,
but now i saw red nothing but red
Anger found me.
"Love"
ReplyDeleteI saw Love clearly.
He turned and looked at me and blew me a kiss.
I saw his hazel eyes and tan skin.
He said to me "I love you dearly and I hope you do too!"
I felt like I was dreaming in heaven!
"Love" I saw Love clearly.
ReplyDeleteShe was smiling.
She turned red when she saw me. I saw her lovely eyes and perfect skin. I heard her say come in.
And I felt like I was in heaven.
"Death"
ReplyDeleteDeath stalks you like a madman
With it's sorrows and it's ways
When it happens you get over it
But the feelings always stay
It brings deppresion
It brings tears
It brings hopelessness
It brings fears
Death is the end of some ones life
Some happy, some not
But one thing is fore sure
It will break you heart a lot
"Love"
ReplyDeleteI saw Love clearly.
She was with me.
She turrned and looked at me closely at me.
Darkness
ReplyDeleteI saw Darkness clearly.
He turned around and ran.
I say his black eyes and his dark skin.
I heard him say death and I felt scared.
Sadness
ReplyDeleteI saw sadness clearly
In peoples faces
waiting to be pleased
I saw her sad face
her eyes and pale skin
I herd her saying sad things
and she made me sad to.
Sadness
ReplyDeleteI saw Sadness clearly.
She was crying tears of blue.
she turned bright red with a hurtful face.
I saw her watery eyes and her pale skin.
I heared her say "My life is all but sadness."and I felt sad.
"Bliss"
ReplyDeleteI saw Bliss cleary.
She was playing in the meadow
She turned and smiled.
I saw her blue eyas and tan skin.
I heard her say "Enjoy now!"
And I felt joyful.
"LOVE"
ReplyDeleteI saw love clearly.
She was beautiful.
She turned and started walking away.
Isaw her perfect eyes d her perfect skin
I heard her say good bye and I was happy
Love
ReplyDeleteI saw love clearly.
She was happy.
She turned red in the cheeks with a smile on her face.
I saw her blue eyes and soft skin.
I heard her say her name and I felt normal.
Basketball
ReplyDeleteI see her thrill very claer.
She begs me to come closer.
I saw the sparkle of pure joy in her eye.
Her face fills my need for adventure.
I herd her gorgeous,and truthful voice.
I felt like she knew how she enlittened me.
I see her moving everyone along together.
She is pushing us forword to sucess.
I saw their hopes and dreams in her eyes.
Her face shows you her true meaning.
I feel like she brings peace and equality.
She doesn't say only surten people or traits.
i saw the soul of a rock clearly,
ReplyDeleteit was standing there furious,
it turned and said "i hate you,
why do i have to be a rock and you a homosapien?!"
i saw its gloomy eyes,
watering with tears
i heard it say i am nothing to nobody
and i felt so hurtful that i adopted it and named it phillip....
i said, "you are my world,
my compaion,
my cicrlce of life,
you are my best friend!"
"Death"
ReplyDeleteI saw Death clearly,
He was sitting one foot away from me,
I heard him say to me,
"I don't want to be alone"
It made me so sad that I started crying right then and there.
He reached out to me,I didn't know what to do.
He whispered something.
I didn't understand a word he was saying, but I knew that he was hurt.
My head was hurting, I felt sick to my stomach,and my hands were shaking.
When I blinked my eyes, he was gone.
For about 3 seconds, I had my eyes shut tight.
I felt stiff.
I felt like I couldn't move.
I felt my eyes watering.
You wouldn't believe what I saw when I open them-
I saw him laying down.
His hands were cold, his head was cold,
...for God sakes He was cold.
Suddently, I felt cold.
Once again, I felt a tear coming from down my face, but not just any
tear.
A lonly tear that gave me a sign.
Remember.....I don't want to be alone.
"Death"
ReplyDeleteI saw Death clearly.She was in pain and did not want to be weak.She turned weaker but still had strong faith.I saw her hopeful eyes and pale skin.I heard her say she felt fine.And i felt sad because I knew she would pass.
I saw his face clearly
ReplyDeletehe was standing besides me,
He turned and looked at me,
I saw his hand shaking,
his eyes wide open and pale skin
i heard him whisper i love you but i have to do this and he shot hiself, and i felt sad mad angry at the world i love him why would this happen to me.
i saw hapiness clearly
ReplyDeleteshe was still playing tag with her friends
then she turned and she saw me
i saw her radiant and beautifull eyesand her skinmatched her eyes
i heard her say that she was going to make everyone happy one day
and i felt that she was a mirical
"friendship"
ReplyDeletei saw friendship cleary.
she was smiling.
she turned to watch me.
i saw her glimming eyes and
her smooth tender skin.
i heard her say
"friends are forever"
and i felt content!
"Pain"
ReplyDeleteI saw Pain Clearly.
He was waiting to hurt me.
He turned swifly and looked at me.
I saw his dark shadow eyes look at me."I heard him say I wont hurt you",and then I felt Pain.
"Hate"
ReplyDeleteI saw "Hate" clearly.
He was throwing fire at trees.
He turned and stared deeply at me.
I saw his bloody red eyes and real dark black skin.
I heard him say "I'm wayching you"
And I felt scared!!
WEIRD NATURE
ReplyDeleteI saw mother nature clearly.
She was
changing the world
She turned
her face my way
I heard her say
"The world is spose to be blue".
And suddenly I felt
blue.
"DEATH"
ReplyDeleteI saw Death clearly
as she turned and looked
at me.I saw fear in her eyes
and her skin white and
pale.I heard her say "don't
let me go". I felt sorry
because I couldn't help
her. She was gone within 5
seconds and I cried and I
cried. She was gone 6 feet
under.
The Referral
ReplyDeleteI saw a Referral clearly.
She was very angry with me.
She turned red in her office.
I saw her mad eyes and her red skin.
I heard her say Ms. Salazar and I knew I was in Big trouble
And I felt terrible.
"MAD WOMEN"
ReplyDeleteI saw her clearly.She was mean. I saw her green eyes and dark chocalate skin.I heard her say your dead.And i felt terrified.
Happyness
ReplyDeleteI saw happyness clearly with my eye's she turned and started smiling and laghing as if she was happy, then she terned and started walking and laghing at the same time. I saw her at the cafeterea happy with a big smile, her eyes told me that she was happy. I heard her say that happyness was contages, but I didn't bealeve her but then in seconds I started laghing, smiling I was happy.
I saw happiness clearly He was happy and grateful. He turned
ReplyDeleteand wacthed me .I saw his bushy eye lashes and I heard him say hello.I felt that he cared to even notice I was even there.
Happy&Worried
ReplyDeleteI saw my brothere cleary.
He was happy and worried.
He turned and saw me.
I saw his face happy but his worried
eyes and his soft skin.
I heard him say to watch myself
and he would be there for me.
And I felt
happy but worried.
to
"SADNESS"
ReplyDeleteI saw sadness clearly,
It is standing here besides me
waiting,
I saw his sadness in his
eyes and bittering skin,
I heard him say
they are always sad,
and I felt
sad too.
I saw Sadnes right in front of me,
ReplyDeletehe was wating to attck me
he said no more grinnig its all going to end
The happines of your life is going to end!
Instead of laughing your going to be crying.
The day was dark instead of sunny!
The clouds were black instead of clear.
I finally found out that Sadnes had beaten me.
"happy"
ReplyDeletei saw Happy clearly
she was running striaght towards me coming to end my Sarrow,she turned around and said "wipe your tears happieness is here"i saw her Happy brown eyes gleam out the Sarrowand her white skin come closer in the darkness of the nightthen i heard her say"now everytjhing is okay mean old sarrow is gone for good"and i felt Happy again for the first tim e in a long time.
"God"
ReplyDeleteI see God clearly.
He was standing in the clouds.
He turned towards me gracefully.
I saw his beautiful warm eyes and clean skin.
I heard him say,"Shh! do not fear me I am God and I love you so come with me and be my daughter in christ."
And I felt love.
"Happyness"
ReplyDeleteI saw Happyness clearly.
He was bright and colorful.
He turned and I saw him smiling at me.
I saw his face it was bright yellow with blue eyes and beautiful skin.
I heard him say never give up fallow your dreams.
And I felt this warm feeling inside of me that made me happy.
I saw soccer clearly
ReplyDeleteI was standing there waiting to take the shot.
The goally turned around.
I looked at the him straight in the eye.
He had thick skin.
I heard the goally say I was going to miss it.
And I felt confident that I was going to make it.
I saw happy clearly,
ReplyDeleteShe was looking at me with joy
She turned around
I saw her playing with a soccer ball
Her eyes and her skin are fine
I heard her say my name and i felt happy.
I saw happyness clearly.
ReplyDeleteHe was smiling with joy.
He turned away.
I saw his sky blue eyes and clear skin.
I heard him her say hi
and I felt happy.
"Hate"
ReplyDeleteI saw Hate clearly,
He was standing over our country smiling
He turned and saw love
I saw his eyes turn white and his skin turn red and blue
I heard him shout "No!"
And I felt his arms sperate our nation... even more
crazy
ReplyDeleteI saw he was clearly.
He turned.
I saw his wide eyes and shaking sikn.
I heard him say whats happen to me.
And i felt crazy.
"Rage"
ReplyDeleteI saw rage clearly,
He was clenching his teeth and closing his fists.
He turned towards me and shoved me out of his way.
I saw his dark, fiery eyes and bright red skin.
I heard him say hateful words and I felt enraged too.
"Dishearten"
ReplyDeleteI saw dishearten clearly.
She slumped into her chair and turned toward me to stare with the cold, black, emotionless eyes. After she had me trapped in her gaze she said "There is no real happiness, all the smiles disappear as quickly as they come."
My face flushed white and I turned at her with a cold stare. The more I thought about it, the more I became like her...dishearten. All happiness washed out of my body and ai that moment I knew that I was dishearten too.
.::::ABSURD::::.
ReplyDeleteI saw Absurd clearly,He was without regard
He Turned swiftly and goofy
I saw his big red bulgy eyes and his deep cracked skin
I heard him say:
"Holy Cow who are you?!!"
And I Felt......Absurd......
Gentle
ReplyDeleteI saw gentlenee clearly.
She was siting at the park.
She turned and smeiled at me.
I saw her brown eyes and soft skin.
I heard her say to me,"Need a frined" and I felt safe.
"Happyness"
ReplyDeleteI see happyness clearly.
She is standing far away.
She turned and looked at me waiting for me to pursuit her.
I see her beautiful purple eyes and her gleaming skin.
I heard her say, "Don't let anyone tell you, you can't do something."
And so I felt that I must be strong and Must be ready in the Pursuit of Happyness.
"Happiness"
ReplyDeleteI saw Happiness clearly.
He was watching me...
Looking right through me...
Knowing I have sadness in my heart.
He turned and came towards me.
I saw his hazel eyes and brown skin.
I heard him say,"Live your life right, and everything will be full of happiness."
At that moment, I felt elation go right through me.
"goofy"
ReplyDeletei saw goofy very clearly
she was laughing histerically
i saw her lite pretty brown eyes
and her smooth brown skin.i heard her say gwersh lol how ya doin?
and i felt like laughing as well.
Lonely
ReplyDeleteI saw she was lonely clearly.
She turned away from me as I tried to talk to her.
I saw her glowing eyes and pale skin.
I heard her say, "Leave me alone."
And I felt lonely too.
"Depression"
ReplyDeleteI see depression clearly.
She was under a blanket hiding,
Waiting patiently for her happiness but it never came,she turned and looked at me with her peircing eyes,looking as if she was going to attack me with depression,
I saw her dark blue eyes and very pale skin,shivering.
I heard her cry out for help.
And I felt her depression.
DEATH
ReplyDeleteWhy is there DEATH
Why such a thing
Why cant we live forever
People die everyday
She turned on me
When I saw a sezsure
Unbreakable Unstopable
“Depression”
ReplyDeleteI saw depression clearly,
He's standing along the sidelines feeling down,
He turned and I saw his pitiful eyes and pale skin,
His eyes were glowing red with the ability to crush me,
His pale skin,hard as stone,glistened I heard him say,
"Life's not going to get anybetter."
And I felt cold and down,
I felt tears roll down my face,
That’s when I realized that depression got it's best of me.
"Pain"
ReplyDeleteI saw Pain clearly
He was seeking out
his next victim
He turned to me
I saw the daggers in his eyes
and the ghostly white tint
of his skin
I heard him say
"There's no escape"
And I knew
All that he said was true
I saw Death clearly.
ReplyDeleteHe turned and pointed not at me,
but my family.
I saw his pitch black eyes and
his skeleton-like body.
I heard him
shh...
I heard him say he would take
everyone I every loved away.
I felt him,I fely him watching
them,wathcing them fade awaY
"aids"
ReplyDeleteI saw aids running thruogh his face
He was trying to make it leave but their was no cure.
I saw his weekness in his eyes and the pain in his skin. i heard him say "help i need you ineed a friend i fel sick and droppy like if i was to just fly away from the ground" and i felt the same pain like if i was right in his shoes i wanted to die but i had hope he was going to be just fine with or without me.
{{Happy}}
ReplyDeleteI saw happy clearly
He was iut with his friends
Everyone he knew had never been mad
If they were he was always cheer them up
He was kind to everyone and friendly to them all
I say his eye glemming with a star in it happy was his name
I heard him say happy is the game and it felt so real until
I woke up and fgured out
It was just a HAPPY dream
"Gloom"
ReplyDeleteI saw Gloom clearly
She was sitting in the corner, showing her
Sadness
She turned
And looked at me
I saw her tears roll down her face from her
Eyes and i was her marks on her skin
I heard her say
Don't end this way
And i felt
A deep sorrow for her
SADDNESS
ReplyDeleteI saw saddness clearly.
He was talking with his friends.
He turned around slowly but cautiously
He began to cry saying,"bye",as she left in the sunset.
she heard him say "i'll never forget you"she felt said ever since
You are all doing a great job with personification. Super imagery!
ReplyDelete"Love"
ReplyDeleteI saw loive clearly.
He was cuddly and sweet
I saw hearts floating above his heard.
His blue eyes pierced my soul and white skin glistened
I heard him say, "It's love at first sight"
And I felt like a new bird in the sky.
I saw her clearly
ReplyDeleteShe was tall and faithfull.
She turned bak and smile
I saw her beautiful blue eyes and her her tan lush skin.
I heard her say you are a special person and I felt wonderful inside.
i saw her clerly.
ReplyDeleteshe turned her face.
i saw her black eyesand mixed skin.
i heard her say come here.
and i felt good
"COURAGE"
ReplyDeleteI saw courage clearly.
He was standing up to his fear.
I saw his shine browne eyesand ashie skin.
I herd him say I can do it and I felt that he was courage.
yelling is what hear eerday,nobody can't live without it's at home almost everday , I can't stand yelling it's annoys me everday, I don't want to listen to it's making crazy I just wish there will be no more yelling for days.
ReplyDeleteI saw a puppy clearly.
ReplyDeleteHe was soft and calm.
He turned on me.
I saw his evil eyes and his soft skin.
I heard him bark in a mean tone.
And I felt very afraid.
I saw death clearly,
ReplyDeleteIt looked me right in the face,
I looked at it bck,
it came towards me like the, speed of lighting
I yelled for Jesus and it worked.
"anger"
ReplyDeleteI saw anger clearly.
She was looking at me with a burning fire in her eyes.
She turned to see the burning sun and then back to me.
I saw her purple eyes and bronsed skin.
I heard her say "I don't love you any more"and i died inside.
"Happy"
ReplyDeletei saw Happy clearly, and excited,
She turned a frown upside down,
I saw her calm eyes,
and anxious skin,
I heard her say
'this is fun'
And then I felt
Happy
wonderful
ReplyDeleteI saw it clearly standing there with a smile beaming in the sun light helping us all.
BASKETBALL
ReplyDeleteI saw basketball clearly he was one ofthe best kids on the court.
He turned to be better then any body else.
So then one day the dude who gets the coach gave him a deal his face and blue eyes and his face turn pale.
I heard him say I knew I can do it
And I felt so happy that he made it.
I notice he could do it.
$$$life$$$
ReplyDeleteI see life clearly
life has many riches.
if u are lucky some people come frome having nothing to having every thing .
some people come frome having every thing to having nothing.
life is not fair in many ways .
one way is things in the world that people cant get .that is how i understand life.
I saw happy clearly he turned and look at me(he was sexy)He said that we had the same feelings because we were both allways smiling so no matter how bad is my day I would allways be happy
ReplyDeleteJEALOUSY
ReplyDeleteI saw jealousy clearly.
He was waiting for someone .
He turned and smiled at me.
I saw his sky blue eyes and his clear skin.
I heard him say ,''I LOVE YOU'',but to someone else.
I felt dejected.
I saw sadess cearly. It was siting down. He turned and said Im
ReplyDeleteI saw my little sister clearly.
ReplyDeleteShe was there playing quitely with her dolls.
She turned around and noticed me. She said "hey, you scared me",
and i laughed inside.
I heard the voice inside me saying "you are lucky to have her."
I thanked her for being my sister and gave her a hug.
That's when i remebered that she was a gift to me.
She was a little girl and she made me happy.
I sat down and thanked my parents, then at night i thanked god also.
I was thankful for everything i had.
DEATH
ReplyDeleteI saw death clearly. She was standing next to my bed. She turned and glared at me. I saw the half of her face that was gone. I heard her say " I will get you." And I gelt like screaming. But I couldn't
"Oscar" I saw Oscar clearly,He smill and he was happy He walked torwed me. I saw his happynessin his eyes and his smill on his skin.I heard him saying "Im happy like the sun,And I felt surpris,happy, and calm.
ReplyDeleteDarkness
ReplyDeleteI saw darkness, clearly. He was turned around with you.
I saw his big eyes and light skin.
I heard him say I'm going tot he store at night and I felt scared.
"love"
ReplyDeleteI saw love he was clearly. nearly turned when i saw his pretty blue eyes and his soft,smooth skin, I heard him say "true love starts now" and i felt like true love really started right there.
"Sadness"
ReplyDeleteI saw my sister's sadness clearly.
I had seen the tears fall from her eyes.
I saw her eyes get red and I heard her shaking in her skin.
And I felt like she was hopeless in a way I never seen her before.
And all of this was because of my grandmother had passed
true Love the right man (Michael)
ReplyDeleteI saw Michael clearly.
He was Writing in his journal plus he was smilieing i wondered what he was writing.
He turned and Said hey how you been so he stop writing and looked up.
I saw his amazing Baby blue eyes that know one chould recest and Carmal looken skin.
I heard him say you are the best thing that has ever came into my life. I wish you would stay in my life forever. so blussed and started to hug him thats what ture love is to me.
" I saw love clearly "
ReplyDeleteI saw love clearly,
waiting and watching for its next victim,
Only to jump in and right back out,
leaving one with a broken heart,
and jumping right back in, as if it felt the pain that you were in.
I have seen love clearly.