Monday, March 31, 2008

March 31 Journals

Today is your last week in Writing Lab. Please take out your submission tracker. Remember when I am looking at your second and third submissions, I expect to see higher scores. This shows me you are attempting to revise and improve your writing. Work on completing all essays and getting rid of red triangles in Study Island. I expect everyone to have attempted one extra credit essay.
  1. March 30 was Doctors' Day. Imagine and describe what the world would be like without doctors.
  2. What TV show family is most like your family? What are 2 similarities and 2 differences? Explain.

62 comments:

  1. If the world had no doctors there wouldnt be any hospitals and the world would be full of people with injuries and then no one could play doctor anymore cause there wouldnt be any.

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  2. The world would be very sick if they whern't an doctors to cure the public.

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  3. if there were no doctors then we will have a lot of dead people rite now they will have a lot of frenurals because a lot of asma attacks and stuff

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  4. the world without doctors would be very bad because there would be no one to help us when we are sick or hurt.

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  5. If there was no doctors in the world we will all be dead.

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  6. If there was no doctors in the world we will all be dead.

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  7. Without doctors, the world would be in a very different place. People would be very ill and would have to suffer from diseases that doctors have cured. Without doctors, men and women would be weak and malnourished.

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  8. If the world has no Doctors. Then nobody will be able to take care ofd the sick and the old and the hurt.

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  9. The world would be filled with sick and injured people. Doctors are very important because they help people get healthy and they find cures for diseases.

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  10. The world without doctors would be horrible because there will be more deaths and no one will know whether they have some sort of disease or if they don't.

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  11. if we did not have doctors at all we would probaly be dead because no one would have ther shots.

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  12. If the world did not have no doctors people will die and people will be injured and really sick.

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  13. if there were no doctors in the world the world would be chaos since there is alot of tragidies everyday people would just die

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  14. WITHOUT DOCTORS NO ONE WOULD REALLY LIVE ALONG TIME BECAUSE NOW A DAYS THERE ARE SO MANY DISEASES YOU CAN CATCH SO EASILY OR EVEN CATCH THEM FROM ANOTHER PERSON. WITHOUT DOCTORS THE POPULATION OF PEOPLE IN AMERICA WOULD GREATLY DECREASED. I LOVE DOCTORS!

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  15. WITHOUT DOCTORS NO ONE WOULD REALLY LIVE ALONG TIME BECAUSE NOW A DAYS THERE ARE SO MANY DISEASES YOU CAN CATCH SO EASILY OR EVEN CATCH THEM FROM ANOTHER PERSON. WITHOUT DOCTORS THE POPULATION OF PEOPLE IN AMERICA WOULD GREATLY DECREASED. I LOVE DOCTORS!

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  16. My family is compared to the Boondocks. Me and my brother like to play with our BB guns just like Riley and Gary do in the show.

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  17. My family is most like the Addams Family. Both of our families live in spooky, old houses, and we both have big families. The Addams Family has aunts and uncles living in their house while my family doesn't. They also live in a haunted mansion and we don't.

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  18. if the world did not have eny docters i think that most pepol would die at a yonger age.

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  19. If the world had no docters, people wouldn't be able to cure infections or get AIDS treatments. A common cold could be a hazard. If people broke their bones, they would probably have to use cement casts, making it highly uncomfortable for the person wearing it. There probably wouldn't even be band-aids, so even a cut on the leg could easily get infected. Life would be hard without docters. And especialy for cancer patients, who usually get treatments to control the out of control cells rushing through their bodies, damaging their bodyparts. We need docters!

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  20. If the world was without doctors it would fall apart everyone will have work together to survive if they dont they could die of disieses thats how the world could be if there was no doctors

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  21. If the world didn't have doctors a lot more people would be sick and could die.

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  22. If we didnt have any doctors then our world would be a very diffrent place. Most of the people here on earth would be dead or sick. In that case it means very weak.

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  23. If the world didn't hsve doctors everybody would be sick and there will be no one to help the sick so that means that a lot of people will die.

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  24. I think that life with out docters would be like everyone being sick and there would be no one to help us when we are in need of medical assistant.

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  25. It would be worried bacause there wouldnt be that many people probably.

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  26. If we did not have any doctos the world would be very sickly becuse without doctors we would not now if kids or adults are mrunning fevers or anything.

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  27. If there were a world without doctors many people would be sick and dieing and we couldnt do any thing about it because we would not know how to cure them.

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  28. There would be lots of people dying from injuries.

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  29. I think that everyone would have broken bones and have people dying.:( ******$$$$$$$#######:P

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  30. There would be lots of people dieing

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  31. if there were no doctors in yhe world many people would die and there would be dieseses that could kill every one off. many people wouldnt live very long either.

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  32. The t.v. show that would represent my family would be "The Simpsons". Some similarities would be that my brother and dad alwayas fought that's when my dad lived with us. A difference would be thaut there's only 1 boy and in my family there's two boys.

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  33. If we didnt have any docters in this world then there would be alot of sick people in this world. Also the people that are sick wouldnt have any one to help them or give them any treatment for there condition.

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  34. if the world didnt have doctors it would be terrible because if some one gets sick there wouldnt be any one to cure you.

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  35. If the world had no more doctors, I think we would all go crazy because no one could get treated for their illness or their injuries and people would try to heal themselves and it wouldnt heal the right way and people would be injured for life.

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  36. If we did not have doctors in the world it will be with lots of sick people and lots of lives gone. People having cancer and no cure. Our lifes will bw terrable!

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  37. I imagine that it will ge very horrifying and painful. There would be zero prescriptions to be given. The world be very sick and have to find there own cures for sickness. I would try my best to bring back doctors. They are very important and are needed for the world.

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  38. I think that a world with out a doctor is berry dangres becase there would be a lot of illneses.

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  39. I think that it would be very bad couse we need doctors so if we are sick they can check on us and tell us if we need to go to the hospial or not so i think they are very importent

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  40. My family is like Malcom In the Middle. Two diferences are that we are a family of 5 not 7 ,And we are not that bad. some simmilar things is that my family is all boys exept my mom, and we fight a lot.

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  41. If we didnt have doctors we would maybe have a serious SICKNESS and we wouldnt be able to have any cures because sometimes only doctors would know and diffrent medications that a doctor can give you.

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  42. if we had no doctors we would all die in a matter of time

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  43. if we had no doctors we would all die in a matter of time

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  44. if we had no doctors we would all die in a matter of time

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  45. with out doctors we will die

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  46. if the world never had any type of doctor we would die of sickness

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  47. a world without doctors... well... most of us would be dead then

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  48. I think that lots of people would be dieing

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  49. If the world were without any doctors. I think it would be caotic because then if you got sick who would cure you. Also everyone would get sick and it would spread. Also lot's of people would be injured maybe. Then who would give them medicine.It would not be good at all.

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  50. a wourld without docters would be keause

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  51. If poeple were sick poeple will get the same thing.

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  52. A world without doctors would be a very bad world. People would be dieing because there are no dctors to help them. It would be sad and bad.

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  53. if there wasnt no doctors then like every body would be like sick and dying because no body would be there to take care of them or help them in there time of need and i think that like almost every body would be dead because doctors find like cures to stuff

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  54. If i was not a doctors , then they has a lot of dead people.

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  55. If the world had no doctors we will dead or sick in the whole world.

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  56. The world would not be the same because alot because alot of people get sick in the winter and we wouldn't be able to get better.

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  57. If their were no doctors in the world, people would be dying and we would not have medicines neither.

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  58. I think that a world without docters would be a terrible thing.I think this because everyone would be sick.Also i think this because we would have no medicine.

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  59. It wouldn't be a world without doctors

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  60. If the world had no doctors I think that everyone will get sick and the number of people on earth would go down because it was no cure for the people getting sick .

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  61. If there were no doctors in the world people that are injured would die.

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  62. I imagine that if there werent any doctors a lot of people would die.

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